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kokho
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PostPosted: 2007-11-25 07:44:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎 lijingyi007 :) 您就是缨子 吧。。

对不起哟,本来这里打扫干净,准备欢迎朋友来 诗情画意;

结果 有人打翻醋坛子,我们还在清理;破缸子终于搬走啦。

招待不周,敬请原谅。。。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-25 07:51:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

在请问 lijingyi007 你就是 樱花听雨 吗?

如果不是的话,请你自己 在版面发一个新贴哟。。

你的作业 已经发到 樱花听雨 的作业簿里面了。


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PostPosted: 2007-11-25 18:41:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈:我觉得KOKHO也是为网站提升人气在努力,大家应该互相支持一下,平等尊重是前提。
事情没有必要在争论下去了,大家握手言和好不好?
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PostPosted: 2007-11-25 18:48:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

来看看咯!有时间就来发发贴 super man
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PostPosted: 2007-11-25 18:56:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
博弈:我觉得KOKHO也是为网站提升人气在努力,大家应该互相支持一下,平等尊重是前提。
事情没有必要在争论下去了,大家握手言和好不好?
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认可半溪明月的意见,
记得当年我第一次当老师, 也是很紧张的, 希望大家能多支持一下KOKHO先生
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PostPosted: 2007-11-26 09:54:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

狼烟四起 这是为何?网上学诗 愿者既是开心!何必这么。。。没有意思的 发白 啊
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 05:00:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

朋友们
我个人认为,kokho能在这里给我们提供一块交流的园地,是值得我们这些诗歌爱好者欣悦的,不要刻板交流语言的是非,这里是广阔的绿地,任你奔跑,让我们能在这里赏慕更多的诗情画意吧!
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 06:48:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

来支持一下,很有创意和吸引力的尝试!

别拌嘴了,都是兄弟。

知者的最大陷阱,就是知。共勉。 Smile

另,本来报到了,可看到全是年轻漂亮MM, 深感性别年龄相貌三重自卑,悄悄撤了 Very Happy 祝成功!
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 09:24:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

就这样开始做作业阿 余光中阿 好的!
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 09:39:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

掉头一去是风吹黑发,回首再来已雪满白头”
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PostPosted: 2007-11-27 11:05:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

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一路谢来 Smile

给大家来个期中报告 ...

给诗友们推荐一下。。

看看 ange_mcy 悟性很高 :)  几乎看不到 余光中的影子了。

看看 孤独牧牛 余光中的味道很浓, 但是那份小女人的家庭幸福 很渲染的!

看看 勿妄言  的内容评论 很精彩独到 :)

看看 半溪明月 的技术评论 很完整 :) 作业呢,给爱情下了定义!

看看 月挂星空 还把 另外3个名家的 乡愁也发出来了。。



这次,我真的是天上掉下一个林妹妹。。 让我抛砖引玉了!



<> 星期五 我们来个总结讨论, 星期六就有新的作业.

这几天,很多博客的朋友们,还不习惯, 网站的运作,大家耐心哟...

上来发贴有问题,让我打电话给诗友们一一解决 嘻嘻 Smile

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PostPosted: 2007-11-28 03:17:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

现在老师作业太多了,网上都要交作业?
嗨!......
没办法 noooo saddd crying to death water fall spring
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PostPosted: 2007-11-28 09:47:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

看看 ange_mcy 悟性很高 :)  几乎看不到 余光中的影子了。



呵呵

谢谢晓辉~

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PostPosted: 2007-11-28 19:28:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

我完全没有写诗的细胞啊,先看看,狂流汗。。。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-29 00:42:41    Post subject: 完成作业 Reply with quote


勉强凑和了一篇,请大家看了不要流泪,海涵海涵!




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PostPosted: 2007-11-29 10:21:16    Post subject: Reply with quote



全乐吧 - 有尝试 才有进步哟 :)

一人缥缈,欢迎你,,赶快到 版面发一个报到贴 :)

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PostPosted: 2007-11-29 19:48:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

认真学习。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 01:48:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

乡愁是一条弯弯的海峡,我在这头,大陆在那头。
是不是所有的游子,思乡都是一种不变的情怀呢?故乡是一颗没有年轮的树,永不老去!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 18:52:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

花之语

早晨时
心是花瓣上的露珠
等太阳把我蒸发
借风走遍那天涯
寻找你的踪迹

中午时
心是花蕊上的蜜蜂
收集我所有繁忙
变成生活的甜酿
期待你能畅饮

夜晚时
心是花叶上的流萤
点燃我残余生命
给你的青春照明
也算相伴一行
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PostPosted: 2007-12-06 19:03:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

老K的话里面,说中国诗歌现状的,是真的
像我们这些没往里面钻的,也心知肚明啦,不然中国诗歌至于这么惨,根本就上不了台面嘛

支持这个诗歌交流班,一个真正公平开放的平台正是现在新一代的小诗人们最需要的
老K继续努力,千万不要在乎别人怎么说
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