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PostPosted: 2007-11-20 22:22:04    Post subject: 《17》 勿妄言 报到! Reply with quote

17号学员报到,找不到地方 Crying or Very sad
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PostPosted: 2007-11-20 23:00:22    Post subject: Re: 16号报到! Reply with quote

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16号学员报到,找不到地方 Crying or Very sad
http://hi.baidu.com/%C7%BE%DE%B1%D2%A1%D2%B7


热烈欢迎 四川辣女人 :)

《16》号,每个新人来,你都帮我备好 茶点饭菜哟 。。。

帅哥有几、美酒不可少,美女都要鲜花 哈哈

《16》是物流军需金钢也 !!


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PostPosted: 2007-11-20 23:10:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

俺是美女,不是金缸 Rolling Eyes
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PostPosted: 2007-11-21 00:56:02    Post subject: Reply with quote



四川辣美媚







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PostPosted: 2007-11-21 01:10:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈哈,太漂亮了,谢谢kokho
thanks
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PostPosted: 2007-11-21 06:34:09    Post subject: Reply with quote



辣妹 赶快帮忙招呼 :)

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PostPosted: 2007-11-21 09:35:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

勿妄言
成了
16号啦
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再次欢迎哦
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PostPosted: 2007-11-21 20:19:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗辣吾忘言。
说过了,咱老家的最美,你的诗应该最好。
单就笔名来推断。偶妄言了。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-21 21:02:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wink
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PostPosted: 2007-11-22 19:13:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

偶的花花被谁偷了? Evil or Very Mad
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PostPosted: 2007-11-22 19:18:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

谁见过
偷花大盗
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PostPosted: 2007-11-22 19:24:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

岛兄帮偶找回来啊,不喜欢这一缸水 Rolling Eyes
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PostPosted: 2007-11-22 19:34:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

找了一朵菊花
不知道你喜欢不
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PostPosted: 2007-11-22 21:49:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

传说是今天开学,老师到哪里去泡MM了 question boring
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PostPosted: 2007-11-23 05:39:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

余光中的成名诗Sad大概是这个吧)

乡愁

小时候
乡愁是一枚小小的邮票
我在这头
母亲在那头

长大后
乡愁是一张窄窄的船票
我在这头
新娘在那头

后来啊
乡愁是一方矮矮的坟墓
我在外头
母亲在里头

而现在
乡愁是一湾浅浅的海峡
我在这头
大陆在那头



晕!这首诗我很早就读过,居然不知道作者是余光中,巨汗~~~~
评论之一Sad作者 孙宇)

提起台湾著名作家诗人余光中,人们最难以忘怀的诗作就是他的那首《乡愁》了。“小时候,乡愁是一枚小小邮票;我在这头,母亲在那头;长大后,乡愁是一张窄窄的船票;我在这头,新娘在那头;后来呵,乡愁是一方矮矮的坟墓;我在外头,母亲在里头;而现在乡愁是一湾浅浅的海峡,我在这头,大陆在那头” 。诗中充溢着浓郁的乡情和亲情,反映了台湾同胞长期隔绝于祖国大家庭的彷徨和苦闷,渴望结束民族分裂的悲剧的真挚情感。怀乡思亲曾是台湾诗坛最流行的主题之一,诗人也被称为最有影响的乡愁诗人之一。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-23 06:03:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

星之葬 作者:余光中

浅蓝色的夜溢进窗来 夏斟得太满
萤火虫的小宫灯做着梦
梦见唐宫 梦见追逐的轻罗小扇

梦见另一个夏夜 一颗星的葬礼
梦见一闪光的伸延与消灭
以及你的惊呼 我的回顾 和片刻的愀然无语


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PostPosted: 2007-11-24 15:09:46    Post subject: Reply with quote



做得好 :) 乡愁的评论呢 。。



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PostPosted: 2007-11-25 07:45:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

菊之殇

空洞的夜色盛满秋凉 雨斟进孤樽
秋菊低垂慵懒发梢轻诉
伊人清瘦 淅沥声拍打着窗棂

记得同一个雨夜 一枝菊瓣的跌落
跌落在暧昧的馨香里
飘落的声音凄厉 疼痛的滋味 让夜色凛然寒战




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PostPosted: 2007-11-25 08:19:26    Post subject: Reply with quote



乡愁 的评论 找不到的话, 你自己也可以评论呀。。

你可以 从台湾人,和大陆人 在这首诗 发表的时候;

有何不同的看法谈起 :)

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PostPosted: 2007-11-25 08:21:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

勿妄言 wrote:
菊之殇

空洞的夜色盛满秋凉 雨斟进孤樽
秋菊低垂慵懒发梢轻诉
伊人清瘦 淅沥声拍打着窗棂

记得同一个雨夜 一枝菊瓣的跌落
跌落在暧昧的馨香里
飘落的声音凄厉 疼痛的滋味 让夜色凛然寒战





这是 那个 菊花图的 题图诗吗?

写得很好。。。 改天讨论。。
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