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帖子发表于: 2007-09-01 06:49    发表主题: 皱纹 WRINKLES 引用并回复

皱纹

白天
密布在你漠漠脸上
这些时间的运河
是乾涸的
只偶而有风砂
飒飒横过

但每夜
水自深处汹汹涌起
漫出眼睛的古井
将它们一一注满

而你便如首次出航的水手
兴奋地驾起
破旧的记忆之舟
在这没有出口的迷阵里
左冲右突
直到天明


WRINKLES

during the day
these canals of time crisscrossing
your indifferent face
are dry
only occasionally the wind
blows sand across

but at night
water rises from the deep well
of your eyes
overflows and fills them

then like a first-time sailor
you set the ragged sail of your boat
of memory
jostling about all night
in the labyrinth that has no outlet
till dawn
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帖子发表于: 2007-09-01 07:15    发表主题: 引用并回复

这首诗歌内敛而深省. 初始引而不发, 末段却让人如读海明威的<老人与海>. 而那注满的汹涌, 自然而然的流淌着令人感动衔接.

问好非马老师
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大概只有等历练才能写这首诗
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不錯,沉歛而蓄勢.
感覺英文版的段與段間的銜接--巧, 有點律詩'黏'的概念.
覺得.某些字語組合似還可以再修得不露語法痕跡.

比較喜歡中文版的, 用字平簡而成熟.

個見.
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帖子发表于: 2007-09-03 23:37    发表主题: 引用并回复

博弈 写到:
不錯,沉歛而蓄勢.
感覺英文版的段與段間的銜接--巧, 有點律詩'黏'的概念.
覺得.某些字語組合似還可以再修得不露語法痕跡.

比較喜歡中文版的, 用字平簡而成熟.

個見.


支持 :)

。。
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浪游归来,又读非马;汉诗英诗,引我前行!
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