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初读山城子先生的“冬天的情人谷”
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PostPosted: 2008-10-06 02:14:24    Post subject: 初读山城子先生的“冬天的情人谷” Reply with quote

初读山城子先生的“冬天的情人谷”
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_437bfd95010090w7.html
山城子老师的文学素养很好,格律诗、现代诗都很有研究,他的作品厚积薄发,耐读耐品,因本人初学涂鸦,初读一遍,即随读随感,实在难以领悟诗歌丰富意象内核的万一!



黔中冬天的情人谷
(地点、时间,淡然起笔!)


淡季依然徘徊在深秋意绪
(似乎以“淡季”、“徘徊”二词点染着有些迷茫和无奈的深秋意绪,淡季依然停留,尚未启程,似乎心有戚戚啊!)


红叶飞霞黄叶铺金
(一亮,好美的秋色啊!是情人谷的秋色,是成熟、绚丽的人生,抑或两者掺杂的画卷啊?)


山石小路不忍踏去…
(那飞霞、那铺金、那秋色...,叫谁也不忍踏去啊…在流连、在吟哦吧!)


谷底溪涧流淌无声的缠绵
(诗情和画意在舒发、在缠绵,在无声涓涓流淌。。。)


许多故事扑朔迷离
(笔锋一转,有甜蜜、有辛辣、有虚幻......?扑朔迷离、回味无穷...、留有想象的时空...)


热夏三五密友寻句


(最难忘的是那热夏的相知诗友...不是多、只是密..)


如今都失散在哪里?
(淡淡的相思、淡淡的愁绪,难寻、难觅,今日在何方?叫人心动!)


山高林密水远心近
(似乎叹谓大自然、人事的无常,唯有情是真的,心是通的,真是春树暮云,令人怅惋啊!)


临界不越长留美丽
(长久留下的是那...的场景、是那...的情意,地久天长!)


未忘厅内且歌且舞的恣情
(斯情斯景,我也难忘啊!一个“恣”内涵许多啊!)


频频碰杯可再期许?
(反复吟哦,难以忘情!可再期许?朋友!)
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PostPosted: 2009-06-25 18:25:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

郑 君,頗有專業的評鑑視野,
很佩服君之真正評議方式,
不似他人的三言兩語式的敷衍了事!
你是真正的評論家!
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PostPosted: 2009-06-30 21:28:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢先生阅批
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PostPosted: 2011-02-18 19:30:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

新春快乐
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