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阿甑2013-06-29 14:39

好文章不是以时间为转移的!到今天重读,还是触目惊心!

胡济卫2011-09-27 09:18

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胡礼忠2010-11-15 05:16

拜访老师、颂冬祺!

溪月梦2010-02-21 05:25

刚到这里,有点眼花缭乱,还请指导。

张南城2009-08-03 00:12

看望先生,问好。我是个新手,望多关照。

hepingdao2009-01-25 19:53

感谢山城子老师,先生高风亮节,
情怀可嘉,风骨可佩,期待先生大作早日成书

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白衣年代2008-11-08 20:27

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A Photo Worth Thousands of Words

There is apparently no photo
in front of me

only a plain sheet of paper covered by a blizzard
earth far down below
mountains are just like someone else's bread

A group of tiny men
who were so tiny that no one has ever noticed them
but they were there, I know they were there
swaying hammers and casting their shadows into rails of iron

They were so tired, and hungry, but quietly
standing up like chopsticks
even a roaring train could not stir them up

When Mr. Donald Smith drove the last spike, they were not on site
but felt rather released
of their heavy duties

soon forgotten
no one mentions or knows their real names, besides coolies
and no one has ever heard of them again

just a sheer piece of paper
folding its snowstorm around me

in the far distance, a train was approaching
like a tiger
I've never seen

2008-02-01 19:19
Lake (2008-02-01 20:09):


The history of coolies.

Nitpick:

"A Photo Worths Thousands of Words" -- worth?

"When Mr. Donald Smith drived in the last spike" --drove?

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    Lake
hepingdao (2008-02-01 20:21):


Thanks Lake, I will correct these mistakes now

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    hepingdao
William Zhou周道模 (2008-02-02 02:20):


I have read it and learned from you. thanks

倒数第五行,有一键误:sheer ----sheet ?

_________________
    William Zhou周道模
戴玨 (2008-02-02 09:27):


drove in the last spike?
Do you mean drove the last spike into sth?

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    戴玨
hepingdao (2008-02-02 09:51):


戴玨 写道:
drove in the last spike?
Do you mean drove the last spike into sth?


yes

or just say this way:
drove the last spike

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    hepingdao
hepingdao (2008-02-02 09:54):


William Zhou周道模 写道:
I have read it and learned from you. thanks

倒数第五行,有一键误:sheer ----sheet ?


sheer means
纯粹是

跟前面的plain
意思相似,只是语气更强一些

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    hepingdao
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